Short Story for school - Comments, Criticism, Grammer Mistakes? Will give 10 :]?
"Coffee?" Noah sauntered into their room, careful not to step on one of the many objects that were spewed across the mahogany floor and set the cup of coffee on the bathroom sink. "Mmmmm" she said - "Are you still attending the
Punctuation! Like when you wrote "Anywhere", you didn't put in punctuation.
It's supposed to be "Anywhere,"